Band 6+: What do you do

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides sufficient detail about the student's current situation and future aspirations. Consider structuring your answer to directly address the question first, then elaborate on your answer. For example, you could start by stating your current occupation as a high school student, then elaborate on the challenges and your future plans.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor hesitations ('uh') and a slight grammatical slip ('hectic schedule for my parents and teacher' should be 'hectic schedules from my parents and teachers') are present, but don't significantly detract from the overall flow. The structure is clear and easy to follow.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the context. Words like 'hectic' and 'stressful' are used effectively. While the range isn't exceptionally wide, it's sufficient for a band 7. More sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the score.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The aforementioned issue with 'hectic schedule' needs correction. While the range of grammatical structures is present, more complex sentence structures and accurate use of tenses would improve the score.