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Band 7+: Why are some people keen on doing dangerous activities ?

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Well, for me, the reason why people like taking part in some risky activities can be attributed to several factors. The first thing that comes to my mind is that they want to achieve a sense of fulfillment and accomplishment. The second reason I think of is that they want to showcase themselves to others so they can receive the admiration and support they have always wanted.

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Well, for me, the reason behind why people like taking part in some risky activities can be attributed to several factors. The first thing that comes to my mind is just because they want to achieve a sense of fulfillment and achievement. The second thing I think is because they want to show up their self to anyone so they could get the admiration and the support from others that they always wanted.

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