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Band 7+: How can communities effectively address the challenges of urbanization and overcrowding?

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By building more apartments, communities can tackle the problem of urbanization and overcrowding. Also, the government should help communities by building public housing in a dense manner so that it can accommodate more people in a small area. This can provide homes to many homeless individuals and give them the basic right of living in a house.

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By building more apartments, communities can tackle the problem of urbanization and overcrowding. Also, government should help communities by building public housing for them in a dense manner so that it can accommodate more amount of people in small area. This can provide homes to many homeless people and give them the basic right of living in a house.

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Task Response

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