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Band 5+: The chart below shows the destinations of students graduating from Physics and from Arts Design in one European country in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar chart, 'Destinations of Graduates (2007)', detailing post-graduation activities for Physics and Art & Design majors. For Physics graduates: Employment was 41%, Further study/training was 34%, Working and studying was 11%, Unemployed was 9%, and Other was 10%. For Art & Design graduates: Employment was 76%, Further study/training was 7%, Working and studying was 6%, Unemployed was 11%, and Other was 8%.

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the bar chart illustrates the destenations of learners graduating from physics and from arts design in one european country in 2007.

overall,the majority of the graduated students were employees, especially art and design students.Despite the high result less graduate students studying.

after graduating 41 percentage of students got a job and other 34 percentage of them further studying or training.While 11 percent of physic students working and studying ,9 percent students were unemployed. Other 10percent Physics neither working nor studying.

art and design students could easly find job than physics,like 76 percent.But art and design students number less than expected. there are 11 percent unemployed people in this field . now 6 percent of art and design students studying and working.other 8 percent learners didn’t know what to do after graduate.

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students: 8

design: 5

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the bar chart and makes relevant comparisons. There are a few minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasings, but overall the response is clear and informative. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring accurate use of vocabulary related to data description. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the lack of clear paragraphing and logical flow hinders coherence. Transitions between ideas are weak, and the overall structure feels disjointed. To improve, focus on creating distinct paragraphs for different aspects of the data (e.g., overview, Physics graduates, Art & Design graduates) and using transition words to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is repetition of simple words and phrases, and limited use of more sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary related to employment, education, and unemployment. For example, instead of 'got a job,' consider 'secured employment' or 'gained employment'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and focus on mastering basic grammar rules. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors, but always review the suggestions critically.

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