Part 2

Band 6+: Describe an event you attended where you did not like the music What event it was Where it was What kind of music they played Why you did not like i

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

76% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

Now I would like to talk about an event I attended about two years ago when I was in primary school. It happened during my vacation, and we went to a musical event with my parents and my little sister. I went there to listen to some classical music, and I enjoyed it at first, but as time went on, I started to feel a bit cold because the area was open-air and light rain was falling on us. By the end, I didn't enjoy the weather, but overall the music was great, and I took some photos and videos with the artists, which I loved. However, we didn't wear suitable clothes for the concert because it was summer. Since the weather was cooler, we wore t-shirts and didn't have any umbrellas, and that's why I didn't enjoy the concert and the musical event as much as I could have.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Now I would like to talk about events that I attended about two years ago when I go to the primary school. It was happened during my vocation and we went to the musical area with my parents and my little sister. I went there to listen some classic music and I enjoyed it firstly, but when time flows at the end of the concert, it was a bit, I feel a bit cold because the area was open air and the light rain was flowing from bottom of our heads. And at the end I don’t enjoy with the weather but overall the musics are so cool and I enjoy and I took some photos and videos with the artists and I love it. But we don’t wear suited clothes for the concert because it was summer time. And with this help that the weather is not becoming cooler, and we wore some t-shirts and didn’t have any umbrellas, and that’s why I didn’t enjoy with that concert and with that musical event.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 60 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Vocabulary Repetition:

didn't: 4

event: 3

went: 3

about: 2

musical: 2

music: 2

because: 2

enjoy: 2

weather: 2

concert: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but includes some irrelevant details. The description of the event is somewhat clear, but the reasons for disliking the music are not well-developed. The response could be improved by focusing more on the music itself and providing more specific reasons for not enjoying it.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent but contains noticeable hesitations and some disjointed sentences. The narrative is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better connectors and a clearer structure. For example, the transition between enjoying the music and disliking the weather is abrupt. To improve, practice using cohesive devices like 'however,' 'therefore,' and 'in addition' to link ideas more smoothly. Also, try to organize your thoughts into a more logical sequence, perhaps by first describing the event, then your initial enjoyment, and finally the reasons for your later discomfort.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. There are some basic errors (e.g., 'musical area' instead of 'musical event'). To enhance your lexical resource, focus on learning synonyms and more specific terms related to music and events. For instance, instead of 'so cool,' you could use 'captivating,' 'mesmerizing,' or 'delightful.' Also, pay attention to collocations (words that naturally go together) to avoid awkward phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The response contains grammatical errors that occasionally impede understanding. Examples include incorrect verb tenses ('I go' instead of 'I went'), awkward phrasing ('light rain was flowing from bottom of our heads'), and incorrect preposition usage ('enjoy with' instead of 'enjoy'). To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, particularly verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct preposition usage. Reviewing and practicing these areas will significantly enhance the accuracy and clarity of your speech.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe an event you attended where you did not like the music What event it was Where it was What kind of music they played Why you did not like i

Well, I really like to listen to music. When I feel bored, so I listen to music. I feel comfortable and relaxed. So today I will share a time when I really feel bored because the music is on, not my type. Last couple of months ago, my father’s friend’s retirement party, So they invited […]

Band 5+

Describe an event you attended where you did not like the music What event it was Where it was What kind of music they played Why you did not like i

I would love to describe a musical event that I found extremely boring. It happened around two years ago when I was a freshman at university. One day my group mates highly recommended to join us for attending a musical event by Rehana. Since my group meters were all huge fans of her songs, so […]

Band 6+

Describe an event you attended where you did not like the music What event it was Where it was What kind of music they played Why you did not like i

Okay, now I would like to describe a musical event that we attend with my parents and I didn’t enjoy with the environment. When I was studying in the primary school, I wanna attend some classical music concerts And I told my father to bring me over here and it was about 10 minute walk […]

Band 6+

Describe an event you attended where you did not like the music What event it was Where it was What kind of music they played Why you did not like i

I would like to describe a music event that I attended but I didn’t enjoy. It’s a music event called Cheryl Jorib’s concert. I went there two years ago before he died. I went there with my family to Tashkent and before the concert we walked around the park and then we entered the concert. […]

Band 6+

See All

Describe a time when you made a connection with someone How did you meet,and what did you talk about?what did this connection enable you to do or archive?

There have been many instances where I connected with someone but I would like to say the story of the best meeting I have had. This person is now a close friend of mine and her name is Dwarika. I first met her at my sister’s wedding where she came from a different city which […]

Band 7+

Describe a time you received unexpectedly good service. You should say: - Where you were - What service you received - Who provided the service And explain why it was unexpectedly good.

I would like to talk about an hotel that I took on holiday with my friend. We went to the North Europe in Berlin, in numbers, and it was not held, it had four stars and my friend gifted to me for my birthday. So I liked this service not just because they were all […]

Band 6+

Describe a restaurant that you enjoyed going to

I would like to talk about restaurants which name is Jasmin. It’s located in the capital of Azerbaijan Baku, near the Fort Baku shopping centre. It’s a restaurant that serves Chinese Asian cuisine. And first I went there with my sister and I really wanted to try it because it was really popular on social […]

Band 7+

describe an unforgettable advertisement that you saw it.

One advertisement that stands out as unforgettable for me took place during my travels abroad. While I was on my way to a shopping mall, I was captivated by a massive lead billboard along the roadside. The brilliance of the screen was really striking and it immediately drew my attention. As I glanced up, I […]

Band 7+

Describe an enjoyable trip by public transport

I have a lot of experiences with the pen trippers. Now I’m gonna talk about one of the special. I remember when I went to the Zomen with my close friends, Farengis last year. It is one of the most relaxing trip I have ever had. We use public transport for whole trip. A few […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium