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Band 6+: How can we encourage greater civic engagement and participation in democratic processes?

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Well, it depends on the person how they think and how they view civic engagement or the democratic process. Most young people or young adults have the mindset of being successful in their lives, but many of them don't consider the democratic process. We can encourage them by highlighting the characteristics, features, and advantages of civic engagement and participation in the democratic process. There are other factors that can encourage them, but in my opinion, this is enough for them.

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Well, it depends on the person how they think and how they think about the civic engagement or democratic process. But most of the young people or young adults have the mindset of being successful in their life but most of them don’t think about democratic process but we can encourage them by telling the characteristics, features or advantages of civic engagement and participation in democratic process but there are other things that can encourage them but in my opinion it’s enough for them

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democratic: 3

process: 3

civic: 2

engagement: 2

young: 2

encourage: 2

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