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Band 6+: what are the adventages and disadvantages of being a famous child? what can today's children do to become famous what can children do with their fame? Do people become famous because of their talent?

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I believe being a famous child has a lot of disadvantages and advantages. One big advantage is connecting and working with popular actors, bloggers, or just well-known people. In the future, they can help you work in a big company or collaborate with them. However, being a famous child doesn't have many decent advantages because it can be overwhelming. I wouldn't want to be too famous in my childhood. Yes, people become famous because of their talent. When individuals have talent and showcase it, people are often shocked and realize that they have a significant chance to be popular and gain support.

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