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Band 6+: Do you believe that advertising plays a positive or negative role in society? Why?

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Well, from my perspective, OJ's advertisement has more positive aspects. For example, day by day, technology is improving, and more companies like to showcase their products. More people enjoy ordering online, and I think the results have more positive effects on society and make a greater impact on society.

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Well, from my perspective, and OJ’s advertisement has more positive sides. For example, day by day, the technology is improved and more of the company likes to exercise your products and more of the people like to watch it order online and and I think the resorts has more positive sides for society and do more impact for society.

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