Part 3

Band 6+: Do you believe that governments have a responsibility to promote artistic expression, even if it is controversial?

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Absolutely, yes, the government should take responsibility to promote artistic expression, because if the government helps artists improve their skills, it also benefits our republic and allows citizens to better utilize their works.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Absolutely, yes, government should take responsibility to promote artists’ expression, because if government helps artists improve their skills, it also helps our republic. and the citizens of the country can be well used their works.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

government: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a reason for the government's role in promoting artistic expression. However, elaborating on the benefits to the republic and citizens would strengthen the argument. Providing specific examples or discussing potential limitations could further enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but could benefit from more complex connectors to link ideas more smoothly. For example, adding phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to' could enhance the flow. The repetition of 'helps' could be rephrased for better fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. Using more varied and precise vocabulary related to art and government responsibility would improve the score. For example, instead of 'helps,' consider using 'supports,' 'fosters,' or 'cultivates.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. 'Well used their works' is not grammatically correct; it should be 'better utilize their works.' Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in verb tenses and word choice.

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