Band 7+: Do you think children should all have to sports at school?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly answers the question and provides a clear reason. To improve, consider expanding on the benefits of sports in schools with more specific examples or details.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'because' and 'then' provides some structure. However, avoid starting sentences with 'then' as it can sound a bit unnatural. Try to vary your sentence structure to improve coherence further.

The vocabulary is adequate for the question. Using 'refresh their minds' and 'feel energetic' is appropriate. To improve, try to incorporate more varied and precise vocabulary related to the benefits of sports, such as 'enhance cognitive function' or 'promote physical well-being'.

There is a minor grammatical error: 'it helps to them refresh mind' should be 'it helps them refresh their minds'. The sentence structure is simple but accurate otherwise. To improve, try using more complex sentence structures, such as conditional clauses or relative clauses, to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical ability.