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Band 5+: To what extent do you think social media influences our perception of reality and personal happiness?

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Well, I think social media plays a major role in our lives, as the number of people using it is increasing. That's why, after achieving something they wanted, everyone posts it on social media to get...

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Well, I think social media has a majority role in our life, such as everyone, a number of people who use it is getting more and more. That’s why everyone, after getting something, what they wanted, posted in the social media to get…

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Task Response

The response starts to address the question but is incomplete. It needs further development to fully explore the extent of social media's influence on perceptions of happiness and success. Providing specific examples and elaborating on the mechanisms of influence would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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