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Band 7+: Why is air pollution a global health concern?

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It's the fact that with the improvement of humanity, a lot of technologies, vehicles, and factories release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. As a result, when people are exposed for a long time to this environment, dire modifications can be seen in their lungs. That's why it is a global concern that governments should take measures.

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It’s the fact that with the improvement of humanity, a lot of technologies, vehicles and factories release carbon dioxide into atmosphere. And as a result, when people were placed in… placed for a long time in this environment, it is… dire modifications can be seen for other lungs. That’s why it is a global concern that government should take a measure.

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The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear explanation of why air pollution is a global health concern. To improve, consider expanding on the types of health impacts beyond just lung modifications and elaborating on the role of governments in addressing this issue.

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The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and self-corrections ('placed in... placed for a long time'). Using cohesive devices like 'therefore' or 'consequently' could further enhance the flow. Try to minimize pauses and self-corrections to improve fluency.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. While 'dire modifications' is acceptable, exploring synonyms or more specific terms related to health impacts could elevate the response. For example, you could use 'severe respiratory issues' or 'adverse health effects'.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors ('people were placed in' should be 'people are exposed to'). Pay attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Also, 'government should take a measure' could be improved to 'governments should take measures'.

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