Band 6+: Do you think that advertising has a positive or negative impact on consumer behavior?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and sufficient development. It presents a basic viewpoint with a limited example. To improve, provide more detailed explanations and explore multiple facets of the issue. Consider discussing both positive and negative influences of advertising and providing a more nuanced perspective.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations ('by the way'). The organization of ideas could be clearer. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, supporting examples, and a concluding thought. Using cohesive devices more effectively would also improve coherence.

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. While the words used are generally appropriate, the range is limited. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to advertising and consumer behavior. For example, instead of just saying 'bad for our health,' you could use terms like 'detrimental to well-being' or 'contributes to unhealthy lifestyles.'

There are several grammatical errors in the response, including incorrect verb forms ('is increasing,' 'think is bad'), missing prepositions ('pressure on advertising'), and awkward phrasing ('Coca-Cola illustrates its advertising to my country'). Work on improving your accuracy with basic grammatical structures and expanding your range of sentence structures. Practice using a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) to express your ideas more effectively.