Band 5+: What impact does social media have on political discourse and engagement?

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, provide more concrete illustrations of how social media affects political discourse and civic engagement. Focus on elaborating on the mechanisms through which these impacts occur.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are moments where the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and abrupt transitions. To improve, focus on structuring your thoughts more logically and using cohesive devices to connect ideas smoothly. For example, use transition words like 'furthermore,' 'however,' or 'in addition' to guide the listener through your argument.

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. The phrase 'very perfect score' is not idiomatic. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of social media and political discourse. For instance, instead of 'telling about,' use 'discussing' or 'communicating.' Also, avoid using words without a clear context, such as 'Shishir Medica,' which seems out of place.

The response contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'People are free who often use video' is awkwardly phrased. Aim for more accurate sentence structures and a wider range of grammatical forms. Practice using complex sentences and different tenses correctly. For instance, rephrase the sentence to 'People often use videos to...'.