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Band 5+: The line graph shows the average monthly temperature in 3 cities between January and December summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The image presents a line graph showing the average monthly temperatures in degrees Celsius for three cities from January to December. For Dubai, the monthly temperatures are: Jan 20, Feb 22, Mar 25, Apr 29, May 33, Jun 35, Jul 37, Aug 36, Sep 34, Oct 30, Nov 25, and Dec 21. For London, the temperatures are: Jan 4, Feb 5, Mar 8, Apr 11, May 15, Jun 18, Jul 20, Aug 20, Sep 17, Oct 12, Nov 8, and Dec 6. For New York, the temperatures are: Jan -3, Feb -1, Mar 3, Apr 9, May 16, Jun 21, Jul 24, Aug 23, Sep 18, Oct 12, Nov 5, and Dec 0.

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The provided linear chart illustrates the temperature of Dubai, London and New York during all months.

Moving towards the detail of chart, Dubai temperature is highest from January to December, which accounts as 20°C in January. Afterwards the temperature surges rapidly and is on its peak in July at 38°C. However, after this period significant drop in temperature is recorded till December. In December it is same as in January. (20°C)

Turning towards the data of London and New York. The temperature of London is minimum in January as 6.5°C from where it keeps rising and is at its highest point in July as 20°C as same as New York, although New York temperature was only -8°C in January, which till December reduce and is 0°C in December, while 6°C of London in that month.

Overall, temperature of Dubai is highest in comparison with other two cities. When Dubai’s temperature is at its lowest in July, the temperature of other two is at peak.

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temperature: 9

january: 5

december: 5

london: 4

dubai: 3

highest: 3

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The report identifies some main features and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. The structure is present but could be improved with a clearer overview and more logical paragraphing. To improve, ensure data accuracy and develop a more sophisticated overview. Also, focus on grouping information more effectively to enhance coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is somewhat disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between ideas. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively. For instance, the comparison of London and New York could be more integrated. To enhance coherence, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' 'furthermore') to link sentences and paragraphs, making the relationships between different points clearer. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve the overall structure.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise to accurately reflect the data. For example, instead of 'surges rapidly,' consider using 'increases sharply' or 'rises significantly.' To improve lexical resource, focus on using synonyms and varied vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for describing temperature changes and data representation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'Dubai temperature is highest from January to December' is grammatically awkward. It should be revised to 'Dubai's temperature is highest throughout the year.' Similarly, there are issues with verb tense and subject-verb agreement. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and agreement. Focus on using a variety of sentence structures to enhance the complexity and sophistication of your writing.

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