Band 7+: what's your favorite hoby?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is well-developed and directly addresses the question. It provides a clear and personal response, elaborating on the benefits and context of the hobby. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details or examples related to your walking experiences.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The ideas are connected, but could be linked more smoothly. Consider using a wider range of linking words to enhance coherence. For example, you could add 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to introduce extra information.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using 'happy' instead of 'have fun' is a good refinement. Try to incorporate more varied vocabulary related to the feeling of renewal and health. For example, instead of 'renewed,' you could say 'rejuvenated' or 'refreshed.'

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'it feels me like I'm very healthy' which should be 'it makes me feel very healthy'. Also, 'go to walking' should be 'go walking'. Correcting these small errors will improve grammatical accuracy. Focus on using correct verb forms and prepositions.