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Band 6+: The charts below show the results of surveys conducted among three target groups about different aspects of a public library.

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The image displays two pie charts detailing survey results about a public library. The first chart, 'Respondents by target group', shows the composition of respondents as Readers at 45%, Students at 35%, and Citizens at 20%. The second chart, 'Library aspect rated most positively', indicates that Book selection was rated most positively by 40% of respondents, followed by Services at 35%, and Facilities at 25%.

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The pie charts illustrate the ultimate results of questionnaire carried out among three demographic categories – citizens, students, and readers – about various aspects – facilities, services, and book selection – of a public library. Units are measured in percentages.

Overall, the readers section in the first chart and book selection in the second one dominated while the citizens section and facilities recorded the smallest proportion respectively.

Starting with the first chart, the share for citizens accounted for only 20% which was the smallest proportion in the pie chart. Moreover, the readers section dominated with 45%, followed in distance by students at 35%.

As far as different aspects are mentioned, slightly similar patterns can be observed. The facilities section recorded for 25%. The highest proportion was belonged to the book selection with 40%. Additionally, services recorded 35%. Finally, library characteristics rated most positively.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

section: 4

citizens: 3

readers: 3

facilities: 3

selection: 3

chart: 3

recorded: 3

proportion: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the information presented in the pie charts, providing a clear overview of the survey results. The organization is logical, with a general overview followed by specific details from each chart. To further enhance the response, consider using a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data and ensure complete accuracy in representing the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. Transitions between paragraphs are somewhat abrupt, and the connection between ideas isn't always clear. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow. For example, in the third paragraph, you could add a transition word or phrase to connect it more smoothly to the second paragraph. The final sentence feels a bit tacked on and doesn't integrate well with the preceding information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to enhance it further. While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, some phrases are a bit basic. For instance, instead of 'the smallest proportion,' you could use 'the lowest percentage' or 'the smallest segment.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as varying how you describe proportions and shares.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair understanding of grammatical structures, but there are some errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'The highest proportion was belonged to the book selection' is grammatically incorrect and could be rephrased as 'The highest proportion was for book selection' or 'Book selection had the highest proportion.' Also, ensure that punctuation is used correctly to enhance clarity.

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