Part 3

Band 6+: Why do you think people in some jobs make a lot of money?

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Because it's a very tricky question. I think some companies would like to gain benefits from their products. If the products are sold well, the company gains much profit. After that, the company will give their staff a lot of money.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Because it’s a very tricky question. I think some companies would like to gain some some benefits from their products. And if the products are sold well, the company gains much property. So, after that, the company will give their clock a lot of money.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 2

products: 2

company: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from a more comprehensive explanation. Consider elaborating on the factors that contribute to high salaries in certain professions, such as the level of skill required, the demand for the job, or the economic value it generates.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and a slightly disjointed flow. The use of cohesive devices like 'because' and 'so' is present but could be more effectively integrated to enhance the overall coherence. Try to minimize pauses and organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. The phrase 'gain some some benefits' is redundant, and 'property' is not the most appropriate word in this context; 'profit' would be better. 'Clock' is also incorrect; 'staff' is more suitable. Expanding your vocabulary and using more precise terms would improve your score. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are some accuracy issues. While the basic sentence structures are correct, the response lacks complexity and contains errors like using 'clock' instead of 'staff'. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your word choices.

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