Band 5+: do you work or student3

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides relevant details about your current status and future plans. To improve, try to ensure the logical flow between ideas is smoother. For instance, the transition to calling exam preparation a 'hobby' is a bit abrupt; you might explain that you find the process of learning engaging to make that connection more natural. Additionally, ensure your verb tenses are consistent when discussing past studies and current preparations.

The speaker manages to convey basic information, but there is significant hesitation and a lack of logical flow. The connection between studying for IELTS and it being a 'hobby' is somewhat abrupt. To improve, use more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In addition to that,' or 'Aside from my schoolwork,') to link your ideas more smoothly. Avoid repetitive sentence structures starting with 'I'.

The vocabulary is quite basic and repetitive (e.g., using 'studied' and 'prepare' multiple times). There is also some confusion in word choice, such as 'it's a four graduation exam,' which is unclear. To reach a higher band, try to use more precise academic or descriptive terms, such as 'pursuing my studies,' 'upcoming examinations,' or 'dedicated to my preparation.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors that impede clarity, particularly regarding verb tenses and sentence structure (e.g., 'I studied 11th grade' should be 'I have completed 11th grade' or 'I am in 11th grade'; 'between this year' is ungrammatical). You should focus on mastering the distinction between past, present, and future tenses to describe your timeline accurately.