Band 6+: Did you learn art at school

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides relevant personal details to expand on the response. To reach a higher level of precision, ensure that the grammatical structures used to describe the impact of the activity are accurate; for example, instead of saying 'It has made a new life,' a more natural phrasing would be 'It brought new life to my routine' or 'It became a vital part of my life.' Additionally, refining the phrasing of 'relieved my emotions' to 'helped me release my emotions' or 'served as an emotional outlet' would enhance the natural flow of the response.

You answered the question directly and provided reasons for your interest, which is good. However, the coherence breaks down towards the end of the response. The phrase 'It has made a new life' is logically disconnected from the previous sentence, making it difficult for the listener to follow your train of thought. To improve, use clearer cohesive devices to link your feelings to the activity (e.g., 'Not only did it allow me to express myself, but it also helped me relax').

You attempted to use some descriptive language, but there are significant errors in word choice and collocation. 'Whatever something came my mind' is ungrammatical, and 'read my motion' (likely intended as 'relieve my emotion') is a major lexical error that obscures meaning. To reach a higher band, focus on learning collocations, such as 'relieve stress,' 'express my creativity,' or 'unwind after a long day.'

There are several grammatical issues in your response. 'Whatever something came my mind' lacks the correct preposition and structure. Additionally, the transition from the past tense ('I was really interested') to the present perfect ('It has made') is slightly jarring in this context. Try to maintain consistent tense usage when discussing past school experiences. Work on mastering relative clauses and prepositional phrases to improve accuracy.