Band 5+: Do you think social media is a reliable source of information?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the core of the question but lacks depth and clarity. The response relies on a confusing comparison (mentioning 'our article' without context), which makes the argument difficult to follow. To improve, avoid using personal pronouns like 'our' and instead focus on general categories of media, such as 'reputable news outlets' versus 'user-generated content.' Additionally, the response would benefit from more detailed development; for instance, explaining *why* social media is unreliable (e.g., the rapid spread of misinformation or lack of fact-checking) would provide a more comprehensive answer. Aim to expand on the consequences of unreliable news to demonstrate a higher level of critical thinking.

The answer is quite short and lacks the depth required for a Part 3 response, which demands extended discourse. While the ideas follow a basic logical progression, the use of cohesive devices is minimal. To improve, use more sophisticated linking words (e.g., 'consequently,' 'on the other hand,' 'furthermore') and expand on your points by providing more detailed explanations or examples.

The vocabulary is very basic and repetitive (e.g., using 'reliable' multiple times). There were also some errors in word choice/pronunciation in the raw transcript (e.g., 'galbe' instead of 'unreliable'). To reach a higher band, try to use synonyms for 'reliable' such as 'trustworthy,' 'credible,' or 'authentic,' and use more precise academic vocabulary to discuss media (e.g., 'misinformation,' 'fact-checking,' 'unverified sources').

The grammatical structures are mostly simple sentences. There is a fragment error in the raw answer ('Because everyone can post and edit it' should be attached to the previous sentence). To improve, you need to demonstrate a range of complex structures, such as conditional sentences ('If users do not verify sources, they might fall victim to fake news') or relative clauses ('Social media platforms, which allow anyone to post, are often prone to misinformation').