Line Graph

Band 4+: The graphs shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The graphs shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image contains a line graph showing the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017, measured in millions of visitors. For visitors staying on cruise ships, the yearly figures were 0.25, 0.5, 0.25, 0.5, 1.0, 1.25, 1.5, and 2.0 million respectively. For visitors staying on the island, the figures were 0.75, 0.75, 1.25, 1.5, 1.5, 1.5, 1.25, and 1.5 million. The total number of visitors for each year from 2010 to 2017 was 1.0, 1.25, 1.5, 2.0, 2.5, 2.75, 2.75, and 3.5 million.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The provided line chart depicts a certain Carribean Island is visited by the variation of visitors among 2010 until 2017.

Overall, it was evident that in 2010 until 2015, visitors staying on cruise ship are lower than people who have spending their time on the island and in the middle 2015, travelers who are staying on cruise ships is overtake sightseers staying on the island.

Firstly, it can be seen that cruise ships is stayed by visitors approximately 0.3 million in 2010, declining in 2012 about 0.1 millon, and surpassing the value of the patrons on island in mid-2015 about 1.4 millions.

Secondly, it was clear that the proportion of visitors staying on island stabilize in 0.7 million in 2010 until 2011. It peak in 2013 roughly 1.5 million, and remain throughout 2015 years around that. It also indicate that since 2016, decreasing around 1.3 and it rebound to 1.5 million again.

Word Count: 152

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

island: 4

visitors: 4

staying: 4

million: 4

until: 3

cruise: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and attempts to compare the two categories of visitors. However, there are several inaccuracies in data reporting and significant grammatical issues that occasionally obscure meaning. For example, the report states that cruise ship visitors surpassed island visitors in 'mid-2015' at '1.4 million', which does not align clearly with the provided data. To improve, focus on ensuring that the data points mentioned are accurate and that the relationship between the trends is described using clearer, more precise language. Work on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of verb tenses when describing historical data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report follows a logical structure (Introduction, Overview, and two Body Paragraphs), which is a good start. However, the progression of ideas is hindered by significant grammatical issues and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and the transitions between sentences do not always feel natural. To improve, focus on using clearer linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Furthermore', 'Subsequently') and ensure that each sentence flows logically into the next to guide the reader through the trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and often used incorrectly, which obscures the intended meaning. For example, phrases like 'is overtake sightseers' or 'cruise ships is stayed by visitors' are not natural English collocations. There is an attempt to use varied terms like 'patrons' and 'travelers', but the accuracy is inconsistent. To improve, work on learning common collocations for describing trends (e.g., 'experienced a rise', 'remained stable', 'surpassed') and ensure that nouns and verbs are paired correctly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'cruise ships is stayed'), tense consistency (mixing present and past tense), and sentence structure (e.g., 'The provided line chart depicts a certain Carribean Island is visited...'). Many sentences are fragmented or contain errors that require the reader to pause and re-read to understand the meaning. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, correct verb tenses for describing historical data, and the correct use of prepositions when describing data changes.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The graphs shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph present the number of visitors to a specific caribbean dwstination from 2010 to 2017. Overall the total number of visitors on island increased throughout the given period.Despite majority staying on island initially.This was surpassed by those arrived on crusis liners in last two years. The total number of visitors in 2010 was […]

Band 5+

The graphs shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

On the given chart we can see the quantity difference of foreign visitors traveling to a certain carribean island between 2010 and 2017. For all the times there were two types of visitors. The ones staying cruise liners, tourists who wanted to spent the nights on the island. From the start of 2010 there was […]

Band 5+

The graphs shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The provided line graph displays the total number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017, divided into visitors staying on cruise ships, those staying on the island, and the total number of visitors. Overall, the total number of tourists increased significantly over the period, rising from 1 million in 2010 to […]

Band 9

The graphs shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The provided graph displays the amount of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Overall, it is evident that number of visitors staying on island is much bigger than those who prefered to stay on cruise ships throughout the period. However, by the end of the period, the second ones overtook by […]

Band 7+

See All

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

The graph illustrates the percentage of Australian export in Japan,US,China,India over the period from 1990 to 2012. Overall,in the beginning,Japan had the highest account for about 26%,followed by US’s ratio at about 11%.Respectively,China started at 2% and India accounted for approximately 1% .Besides,Japan and China remained a simple trend to develop,while US and India had […]

Band 5+

The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of armed robbery, assault, and murder that happened in London from 2003 to 2012. Overall, the number of Armed Robbery increased sharply, whereas Assault rose over the period. The numbers of murders remained stable between 2003 and 2012. In 2003 Armed Robbery recorded the highest number at around 3.400 […]

Band 4+

The line graph shows the change in population of 5 countries from 1800 to 2000

The line graph compares the population growth of five countries – China, India, the United States, Indonesia, and Brazil- over the period from 1800 to 2000. Overall, the populations of all five countries increased over the period. China and India consistently recorded the largest populations, whereas Brazil remained the least populous country throughout. In the […]

Band 8+

The graph below gives information about one company's unit sales of 5 different types of jam from 2009 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the changes of the unit sales of five different types of jams, namely strawberry, raspberry, plum, cherry, and grape in one company between 2009 and 2014. Overall, most of the unit sales of all types of jam revealed an upward trajectory, except for the plum, which underwent a significant decrease. Additionally, […]

Band 6+

Free time activities of the elderly in the United States from 1980 to the present.

The line graph illustrates the different kinds of activities done by old people in their spare time , covering the period from 1980 to 2010 in United Kingdom. Overall, many of them fluctuated throughout the period, while hiking stared from low figure than overtook watching tv and became more popular hobby by the end. Surfing […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium