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Band 6+: The chart below shows information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing the number of students in five subjects between School A and School B: Social Science (School A: 6, School B: 10), Science (School A: 9, School B: 2), Language (School A: 5, School B: 18), Craft/Drawing (School A: 4, School B: 25), Sport (School A: 36, School B: 5).

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The bar chart illustrates the details of most enjoyed classes of 60 students from school A and B.

Overall, the number of students enjoying sport is the highest in school A, while the subject related to craft/drawing attracts the large group of school B. Additionally, the figure for students of school A is higher than those from school B in most categories, except for sport and science which show a reverse pattern.

In particularly, the majority of pariticipants of school A are in favor of sports, with 36 supports. This figure is over six times the voters of school B. Apart from this, science is the second-favorite subject among students of school A with 9 people opted, yet only 2 students of school B find it intriguing.

Contrastingly, craft/drawing records the most-enjoyed class from school B’s voters, with 25 votes. This figure is significantly higher than that of the group of school A, which stands at a mere 4 votes. This is followed by social science and language, are prefered by 10 and 18 school B’s students, show interest notably. However, only a half and a third of the number of students voted for these two subjects in school A.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 13

students: 7

figure: 3

science: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main features and makes relevant comparisons between the two schools. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the overview incorrectly states that school A has higher numbers in most categories except sport and science, but actually school A is higher only in sport and science. Also, the phrase 'except for sport and science which show a reverse pattern' is confusing. Minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'pariticipants', 'supports', 'are prefered') are present. To improve, ensure the overview accurately reflects the data and proofread for language errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall trend and comparisons. However, some sentences are awkwardly phrased, and the flow could be smoother. For example, 'In particularly' should be 'In particular', and the final sentence is confusing. Work on linking ideas more seamlessly and ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus.

Lexical Resource

Good range of vocabulary with attempts at paraphrasing ('most enjoyed classes', 'in favor of', 'intriguing'). However, there are some inaccuracies ('supports' instead of 'supporters', 'voters' instead of 'students') and awkward collocations ('the large group of school B'). Use more precise and natural academic vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors: 'pariticipants' (spelling), 'with 36 supports' (incorrect noun form), '9 people opted' (missing 'who'), 'are prefered' (wrong verb form), and missing punctuation. To improve, proofread carefully and practice using a variety of sentence structures accurately.

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