Part 3

Band 6+: Advantages of being famous

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Many people became famous during the coronavirus because they started earning by sitting at home, like making TikToks and uploading Reels on Instagram, etc. They use a lot of different websites to make millions a year. So I think there are a lot of advantages to being famous, and on the other hand, there are also disadvantages, but I focused on the benefits of being famous. First of all, famous people are loved by everyone, and they are enjoyed by everyone. They have various ways of connecting with others, and many people like them, giving them a lot of gifts and well wishes, which is good for them, for the famous people.

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Many people are famous during the coronavirus because they start earning by sitting at their homes like they start making TikTok and uploading Reels on the Instagram etc. They use lot of different websites to make million year. So I think there is a lot of advantages of being famous and on the other hand there is also disadvantages of being famous but I focused on the benefits of famous or famous thing. So first of all people being loved by everyone and they got enjoyed by everyone and they have various ways of being to others and many people likes them and they give them a lot of gifts and wishes to them which is good for them, for the famous people. So…

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people: 4

they: 4

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everyone: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and mentions some advantages of being famous. However, it mainly focuses on financial aspects and lacks depth in exploring other potential benefits. Consider broadening the scope to include other advantages, such as influence, opportunities, and recognition, and provide more specific examples to support your points. Avoid overly general statements and focus on providing clear and detailed explanations.

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The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions. The structure could be improved by using clearer topic sentences and transitions between ideas. Practice speaking more smoothly and confidently, focusing on a logical flow of ideas. Consider using signposting language like 'Firstly...', 'Secondly...', etc. to improve coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the speaker uses words like 'advantages' and 'disadvantages,' more precise and nuanced vocabulary could elevate the response. Try to incorporate more specific examples and descriptive language to enrich your vocabulary.

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