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Band 6+: Describe an old person who has chosen profession in medical field

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I would like to talk about my cousin who is a doctor. She is a medical practitioner. She spends most of her day seeing patients, consulting them on various health issues, prescribing medications, and referring them to specialists if needed. She has chosen this profession for a variety of reasons. Firstly, we all know that doctors are well-paid, and being a doctor is a highly rewarding and lucrative job. This is definitely something she has taken into consideration while choosing.

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I would like to talk about my cousin who is a doctor. She is a medical practitioner. She spends most of her day seeing patients, consulting them with the various health issues, prescribing medications and offering them to specialists if they need. She has chosen this profession for a variety of reasons. Firstly, we all know that doctors are well paid and being a doctor is a highly rewarding and lucrative job. This is definitely something that she has taken into consideration while choosing. you you you

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The response is a good start, but it needs more details to fully address the topic. Consider expanding on your cousin's personal experiences in the medical field, including specific examples of challenges faced and rewards received. Adding details about her personality and how it relates to her profession would also strengthen the response. More information about why she chose this profession beyond financial reasons would be beneficial. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

6.5

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. However, there is some repetition ("you you you") in the raw answer, which impacts fluency. Try to practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary repetition or self-correction during the actual test.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate for the topic. Words like "medical practitioner," "consulting," "prescribing," and "lucrative" demonstrate a good range of vocabulary. Consider using more specific medical terminology if possible to showcase a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. For example, the phrase "consulting them with the various health issues" should be "consulting them on various health issues." Also, the sentence structure could be improved for better flow. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure variety.

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Describe a person you enjoy spending time with. You should say: who this person is how you met them what you usually do together and explain why you enjoy spending time with them.

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describe a person who always gives you advice you should say: who this person the relationship of that person to you what advice you receive from him

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