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Band 6+: Do you think all children should learn to play a musical instrument? [Why/why not?]

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Well, I think it could be a beneficial opportunity for them, because playing a musical instrument can help children sustain good memory and develop the ability to solve complex problems as they get older.

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Well, I think it could be a beneficial opportunity for them, because how does that change that playing a musical instrument can help people and actually children sustain good memory and the ability to solve complex problems when they get older?

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