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Band 4+: The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph showcasing the population size, birth rate, and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 with population in millions and birth/death rate per 1000 people. Population size steadily increases from 3 million in 1700 to 50 million in 2000. The birth rate fluctuates, starting at 30 in 1700, peaking at 35 around 1800 and 1900, dropping to 20 by 1950, and returning to 35 in 2000. The death rate starts at 35 in 1700, peaks at 55 around 1750, falls to 10 by 1950, and levels at 20 in 2000.

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The provided line graph depicts the population size, birth ratio and the death rate of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.

After analyzing the line graph, the highest proportion ratio of England and Wales in 2000. Whereas, the birth rate and death rate fluctuations in the year of 1700 to 2000.

In 1700, the minimum population was 3 milion. While, the maximum was 50 million in the England and Wales. 35 million, the highest birth rate in the year of 2000. In addition, the death rate was fluctuations the time period of 300 years. Population size was drastically increase in the England and Wales the period between 1800 to 2000.

In sum up, the highest birth rate 40 per 1000 people in 1750. In contrast, the least 20 per 1000 people death rate in 2000. In 2000, the maximum 35 per 1000 birth rate in the England and Wales. The death rate was constant in the 50 years between 1750 to 1800.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

birth: 5

death: 5

england: 5

wales: 5

population: 3

between: 3

highest: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the main features of the line graph but lacks specific details and comparisons. Some inaccuracies and omissions are present.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report has some coherence and cohesion issues due to inconsistent paragraphing and organization of ideas. Some parts are unclear or repetitive.

Lexical Resource

3.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but inaccuracies and repetition hinder the effectiveness. More precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings throughout the report. More attention to grammar and sentence construction is needed.

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