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Band 6+: Write a letter to a friend inviting them to a special event. In your letter: Describe the event. Explain why you want your friend to attend. Give details about the time and place

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Dear Jaspowal

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to invite you on my new house opening.

I have bought a new house in Windsor, Ontario. I am inviting all our old friends so it is going to be a fantastic gathering with all friends. There will be a small house opening event and after that we will be a D.J party. There will be a special food stalls and as well.

It is been a long time I have not seen you so I will make this a great event. I hope you all will make your presence as special as you are.

Please let me know if you are coming so I can plan accordingly to that. The event is at my new house at 5200 laro Avenue, Windsor, Ontario, N9A 5B4. The programme will start at 10:00 pm. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Take Care

Kamaljit Kaur

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 4

event: 3

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Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, some aspects of the event description could be more detailed and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear. However, improved paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance flow and readability.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would improve the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter conveys its message, grammatical errors and inconsistencies detract from the overall quality. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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