Band 6+: How your hometown is changed over a time?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and demonstrates some understanding of the topic. However, more detail and development are needed to fully address the prompt. Consider expanding on the changes mentioned, providing specific examples, and ensuring a complete and coherent response.

The answer is understandable and coherent, but there are some minor issues with fluency. The speaker hesitates slightly and the ending is abrupt. Adding a concluding sentence would improve coherence and fluency. Try to speak more smoothly and naturally, pausing only for emphasis or to take a breath.

The vocabulary used is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated. More descriptive language could be used to paint a more vivid picture of the changes. For example, instead of 'a lot of greenery,' you could say 'extensive green spaces have been developed' or describe the types of parks or green areas. Try to incorporate more precise and varied vocabulary.

There are some grammatical errors, such as the omission of articles ('a lot of greenery city') and incorrect use of plural forms ('new building'). The sentence structure is relatively simple. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, to enhance the overall quality of your response.