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Band 6+: How has technology changed storytelling?

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Well, actually the era of technology has made storytelling more accessible. For instance, in the past, storytelling was often done by word of mouth or on paper, like conventional newspapers, books, or letters. But nowadays, people can write, post, and share stories on social media, and some can go viral overnight.

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Well, actually the era of technology have made storytelling more accessible. For instance, in the past, storytelling is often by word of mouth on papers, like conventional newspapers, books or letters. But nowadays people can write, then post and share stories on social media, and then some can be super-vival after a night.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

storytelling: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points about increased accessibility of storytelling through technology. However, to improve, consider exploring a wider range of technological impacts on storytelling, such as the evolution of different media formats (film, video games, interactive narratives), and the impact on storytelling styles and techniques. A more in-depth analysis of these aspects would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and self-correction are present. Improving the flow by using more sophisticated linking words and avoiding the slight hesitation ('Well, actually') would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. The phrase 'super-vival' is incorrect and shows a gap in vocabulary. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Consider synonyms for 'accessible' and 'share'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors. The tense is inconsistent ('storytelling is' vs. 'people can write'). The phrase 'storytelling was often done by word of mouth or on paper' is slightly awkward. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.

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