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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Cambridge IELTS 16 Academic Writing Test 3 (Task 2)

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  1. Galina Lee says:

    People often purchase products that contain high levels of sugar. Because of this, food and snacks with excessive sugar should be priced higher to reduce their consumption and mitigate related health issues. I believe that such pricing policies would positively influence consumers’ choices toward healthier snacks and overall eating habits.

    If the prices of products with excessive sugar increase, it will affect people’s snack choices. As a result, individuals are likely to opt for more affordable alternatives that contain less sugar and are therefore healthier. For example, when approaching a snack stall, instead of buying an expensive chocolate bar, consumers might choose a lower-priced snack. This shift in behavior could promote healthier eating habits in the long run. Consequently, higher prices on sugary foods and drinks may encourage people to make more conscious dietary choices.

    Some may argue that consumers will continue to buy high-sugar snacks even after price increases. It is true that certain individuals may find it challenging to give up their daily consumption of sugary foods or drinks due to taste preferences. However, I believe that soon after prices rise, people will notice a substantial portion of their income being spent on these expensive items. Additionally, other financial obligations, such as electricity and gas bills, must be considered. As a result, while people may not change their behavior immediately, over time, their priorities regarding spending may lead to a reduced intake of sugary snacks.

    In conclusion, higher prices on food products will undoubtedly influence people’s dietary choices toward healthier options. While this policy may not bring about immediate change, it requires time to help individuals reassess their priorities.

  2. Rizqina Amalia says:

    A large number of health issues caused by many manufactured food and beverage products contain high levels of sugar. Sweet products should be sold in high price to encourage individuals to consume less sugar. I strongly agree with this statement because increasing the prices can reduce unhealthy consumption and help governments promote healthier lifestyles.

    In detail, when sugary foods and drinks become expensive, people are less likely to buy them frequently and prefer to buy cheaper products with healthier options instead. As a result, many consumers will naturally reduce their sugar intake. Additionally, higher prices make people think twice before buying unnecessary sweet products, especially those with limited budget such as low-income families or students. For example, in United Kingdom, the authorities introduced a tax on high-sugar products. Consequently, the sales of sugary food and drinks dropped significantly, and people began choosing water and low calories beverages instead.

    Furthermore, expensive prices on sweet foods and drinks help goverments to encourage individiduals to adopt healthier lifestyles. Many health problems, such as diabetes and obesity are caused by unhealthy habits like frequently consuming sugary foods. For instance, after UK implemented a sugar tax in 2014, the authorities used the revenue to fund public health campaigns and nutrition programs, which it can raises awareness among people about the dangers of excessive sugar intake.

    To conclude, I fully agree that sugary products should be made more expensive to prevent health problems occured due to unhealthy consumption, and help government promote healthier lives. Even though some people may find it inconvenient, but i believe the long-term benefits are matter to beneficial for society as a whole. (band
    6,5)

  3. Fatemah says:

    Sugar intake is increasing day by day, although sugar is not a ‘pure evil’ but still it is the root cause of various fatal diseases. In the present day, a lot industries are involved in making products such as drinks and food rich in sugar, which ultimately leads to various health problems. It is widely believed that, to discourage the purchase of sugar-containing products it is vital to raise their prices. I agree with this statement to some extent but i believe some other steps could also make a big difference.

    To begin with, white sugar is referred as white poison, which is the leading cause of various diseases. Sugar is not a direct source to initiate diseases such as type 2 diabetes, cancer and cardiovascular problems but it serve as base to such disorders, for instance, weight gain. There is an immediate need to alleviate high instake of sugary products. One solution is making sugar containing products more expensive, price inflation will shifts people prefernce from unhealthy diet to healthier things. Moreover, when people will stop buying unhealthy sugar products it will ultimately compel manufecturers to make manufecture goods with llimited sugar and juice making companies will start making 100% pure juces with fruits without any white sugar.

    However, price escalation is a good strategey to stop people but their are some other approaches which can bring far more benefits than this. Such as, educational institutes and other organizations should organize webinars on the detrimental effects of high sugar intake. Meanwhile, media can also play a strong role in educating people by arranging TV shows with medical and nutrional experts to aware people on the advantages and disdavantages of sugar.

    To sum up, sole strategey of raising prices of sugary products cannot force people from purchasing these products, instead their is an urgent need of awarness seminars, walks and talks realating to this issue. As it is the matter of great concern and authories should work together with medics to solve this issue.

  4. Fahad says:

    At present, high sugar content can be noticed in many processed foods and beverages resulting in higher health issues. A proposition to increase the price of food items containing high amount of sugar in order to motivate people to have less sugar is being discussed by many people. I agree with the proposition as it would incentivize people to choose healthier options and facilitate manufacturing of healthier food products.

    Firstly, increasing the cost of sugary products will influence people to purchase healthier food items. According to the law of demand, price increase leads to decrease in demand. It will cause a fall in demand of sugary foods if the price of sugary foods is heightened. For instance, school children will use their tiffin money to buy healthier tiffins instead of purchasing sugary snacks. Thus, price inflation of sugary food products will result in consumers shifting towards healthier foods.

    Additionally, food manufacturers will be incentivized to produce healthier foods by price hike of suagry items. The increased price of sugary items will lead to higher manufacturing costs and less consumer demand for foods with high sugar content. This will influence food companies to produce more food products with less added sugar. For instance, many food industries are now producing 100% pure fruit juices as a replacement for sugary beverages due to increased demand for healthier drinks. Some might argue that, price hiking of sugary items might affect the sugar industry. Nevertheless, planned regulation by the government can lead to minimum economic damage and maximum health benefits.

    In short, higher influence on consumer’s healthy food selection and facilitation of production of healthier foods are the reasons behind my agreement to increase the price of high sugar content containing food items. This will in turn reduce health problems in the modern world.
    Band Score 7 (8/7/6/6)

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