Part 1
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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide information about the location and types of dance classes young people in an Australian town are currently attending. The pie chart shows the location of dance classes, whereas the bar graph illustrates the types of dance classes by age group.
The pie chart shows that 48% of dance classes take place in private studios, 24% of dance classes happen in school halls (after-school), 18% of dance classes occur in community halls, and 10% of dance classes take place in college-based studios.
The bar graph shows three types of dance classes, namely ballet, tap, and modern, which are participated in by two age groups – one under 11 and another between 11 and 16. Ballet classes are most popular among children under 11. The bar graph shows that 600 young people under 11 are participating in ballet classes. For young people between 11 and 16, the number is 300, which shows ballet is least preferred by people of the same age group. Modern dance classes are most preferred by children between 11 and 16, and the number is more than 500. Modern dance is least preferred by children under 11, and the number is only 300. The number of people attending tap dance classes remains between 400 and 500 in the case of both age groups.
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The highly detailed pie charts illustrate the information about types of dance classes young people different location in a town in Australia are nowadays attending.
Overall, the most striking aspects shown in this figure is that the private studios accounted for the highest proportion in location, and college-based studios for the least proportion. In terms of types of dance classes, ballet shared with the highest number of participants under 11 years old, and modern with significant number of students between 11 and 16 years old.
As it can be seen that, looking at the pie chart, private studios accounted for the highest proportion, with 48%, school halls shared with 24%, and community halls with other locations accounted for 18%. However, college-based studios accounted for only 10%.
On the other hand, different types of dance classes, ballet accounted for the highest number of students under 11 years old, approximately 600, and tap showed about 450. However, modern accounted for only 300 participants. Moreover, modern accounted for the highest number of students between 11 and 16 years old, over 500, and tap accounted for about 450. However, ballet accounted for only 300 participants.
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The pie chart shows the distribution of the locations of dance classes, while the bar chart provides information about the number of participants in different age groups across three types of dance in Australia.
Overall, it is clear that private studios accounted for the largest share, while ballet and modern dance had the highest participation among the under-11 and 11–16 age groups.
Regarding locations, private studios constitute 48%, which makes them the largest proportion in the chart. In comparison, school halls accounted for half of this proportion. Community halls and college-based studios represent 18% and 10% of the total, respectively.
Furthermore, among those under 11, ballet makes up approximately 600 participants, indicating that most children are more likely to participate in this type of dance. In comparison, the 11–16 age group accounts for half of this figure in ballet. The number of under-11 participants decreased significantly to around 300 in modern dance. On the other hand, the 11–16 age group represents just above 500 participants, making it the highest figure in modern dance.
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The charts provide information about the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Overall, it is noticeable that the private studios accounted for the highest proportion in location, and college-based studios for the least proportion. In terms of types of dance classes, ballet shared with the highest number of participants under 11 years old, and modern with significant number of students between 11 and 16 years old.
Looking at the pie chart, private studios accounted for the highest proportion, with 48%, school halls shared with 24%, and community halls with other locations accounted for 18%. However, college-based studios accounted for only 10%.
Moving to the bar chart, ballet accounted for the highest number of students under 11 years old, approximately 600, and tap showed about 400. However, modern accounted for only 300 participants. On the other hand, modern accounted for the highest number of students between 11 and 16 years old, about 500, and tap accounted for about 400. However, ballet accounted for only 300 participants.
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