Part 3

Band 7+: 1. What do young people spend money on?

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Okay, I have some ideas about this. Firstly, there are some main things that young people like to spend money on. One of them is shopping, which is more popular among girls because in my country, girls enjoy going shopping. Another thing that people like to spend money on is outdoor activities. Many people go to the studio and other playgrounds together to play sports. Additionally, some young people like to go to nightclubs, where they sing, dance, and do other things during the night.

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Okay, I have some ideas about this. Firstly, there are some main things that young people like to spend money on. One of them is shopping, which is more popular among girls. Because in my country girls enjoy going shopping. Another thing that people like to spend money on is auto activities. Many people go to the studio and other playgrounds together to play sports. Initially, some young people like to go to nightclubs, where they sing, dance and other things during the night.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 4

some: 3

like: 3

things: 2

young: 2

spend: 2

money: 2

shopping: 2

girls: 2

other: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant examples. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons behind these spending habits and offering a broader range of examples. Focus on providing more detailed explanations to enhance the depth of your answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. The use of 'Firstly' and 'Another thing' is good for structuring the response. However, the transition between ideas could be smoother. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more effectively. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to that' or 'Furthermore' to add more information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. The phrase 'auto activities' is not quite accurate; 'outdoor activities' is a better choice. Try to use more specific and descriptive words to enhance your answer. For example, instead of saying 'other things,' try to provide more details about what young people do in nightclubs.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. For example, 'Another thing that people like to spend money on is auto activities' could be improved to 'Another thing that people like to spend money on is outdoor activities'. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct word choice. Aim to use a wider range of grammatical structures to demonstrate your proficiency.

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