Band 6+: 2. Why do some people become famous but not successful?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The response shows some understanding of the question but lacks development and coherence. Consider exploring the difference between fame and success, and providing specific examples to illustrate your points. More confident and detailed explanations are needed to improve the response.

The answer lacks coherence. The speaker repeatedly says they don't know, which disrupts the flow. A more structured approach, perhaps outlining different reasons why fame might not equate to success, would improve fluency and coherence. Try to avoid filler words like 'well' and 'actually' excessively.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'stems from' and 'main objective' show some range, but more precise and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to enrich your vocabulary.

Grammatically, the answer is mostly correct, but the repetitive 'I don't know' statements detract from the overall impression. More complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score. Focus on using a wider range of tenses and sentence structures to demonstrate grammatical proficiency.