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Band 8+: 3. Should parents teach their children to behave well in public?

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As children aren't born knowing these lessons, it's up to parents to teach their children how to behave appropriately in shared spaces and help them understand how their behaviors affect the people around them. In addition, the behavior of children in public reflects the values and lessons taught in families. So it's important for parents to equip them with valuable advice and lessons so they can manage difficult situations in their lives well.

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As children aren’t born knowing these lessons, so it’s up to parents to teach their children how to behave appropriately in shared spaces and help them understand how their behaviors affect the people around them. In addition, the behavior of children in public reflects the values of lessons and upbringing taught in families. So it’s important for parents to equip them with enriched advice and lessons so they can manage to handle the difficult situations of their life well.

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