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Band 6+: A thing that broken in my family

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Now I would like to talk about something that happened in my family, which was a mobile phone. It was a birthday gift from my father. When I was using the mobile phone, after some time, it slipped from my hand, and I didn't understand how it happened. I felt very bad. I tried to repair it myself, but I couldn't do it. So I decided to take it to a professional.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Now I would like to talk about something happened in my family that happened in my house was a mobile phone. Which was a birthday gift from my house father when I was using the mobile phone. After some time that phone was full from my hand and I didn’t understand how it happened. I felt very bad. I tried to repair it myself but I didn’t do this. So I decided to take it.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

happened: 2

mobile: 2

phone: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is relevant to the prompt and provides a clear narrative. However, to improve, consider elaborating on the emotional impact of the broken phone and the resolution of the situation. Adding details about the phone itself or the relationship with your father could enrich the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some noticeable hesitations and repetitions. The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between ideas. For example, instead of 'Which was a birthday gift from my house father,' try 'It was a birthday gift from my father.'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. The phrase 'full from my hand' is unclear. Using more precise language, such as 'slipped from my hand' or 'fell from my hand,' would improve the score. More sophisticated vocabulary would also enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'something happened in my family that happened in my house,' and 'I didn't do this.' The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focusing on more accurate and varied sentence structures would significantly improve the score. Consider using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice or complex sentences.

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