Band 5+: Are there any hobbies you would like to try in the future?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides two distinct examples of hobbies (cooking and pottery). To improve the response, focus on the precision of vocabulary; for instance, the word 'emphasizing' does not quite fit the context of pottery, whereas 'meditative' or 'engaging' might be more appropriate. Additionally, expanding on why these hobbies are 'suitable' would help in providing a more well-developed and cohesive response.

The speaker attempts to answer the question by providing multiple ideas, which shows a willingness to speak. However, the coherence is weak due to awkward phrasing like 'I have tried for beginners in my mind,' which obscures the intended meaning. There is also some repetition of 'perhaps' and 'I would like.' To improve, use clearer discourse markers (e.g., 'Firstly,' 'Additionally,' 'Another thing I'm interested in is...') to link your ideas more logically.

You used some good descriptive words like 'grounding,' which is quite sophisticated. However, other word choices are imprecise or used incorrectly, such as 'emphasizing' (which doesn't quite fit the context of a hobby) and 'tried for beginners in my mind.' Instead of 'emphasizing,' you might mean 'meditative' or 'engaging.' Try to focus on collocations - words that naturally go together - to sound more natural.

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I would like I have to try on pottery' is a fragmented and incorrect structure. You should use 'I would like to try pottery.' There is also a lack of variety in sentence structures; most sentences follow a very basic subject-verb pattern. Work on using complex sentences with subordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'Since I find pottery grounding, I want to try it soon') to reach higher bands.