Band 7+: Are there any items you used to depend on but don't anymore?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly addresses the question with a clear example and explanation. The answer is well-structured and provides sufficient detail to demonstrate understanding and fluency.

The response is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'actually' and 'however' provides some linking, but more varied cohesive devices could enhance the flow. Consider using phrases like 'In the past' or 'These days' to further clarify the shift in reliance.

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant to the topic. The use of 'rely heavily' is appropriate. To improve, try incorporating more specific or nuanced vocabulary related to technology and work habits. For example, instead of 'entertainment purpose,' you could say 'leisure activities' or 'recreational use.'

There are a few grammatical errors, such as 'I use to rely' which should be 'I used to rely.' Also, 'lecturing during university' could be improved to 'lecturing at university.' While the overall meaning is clear, correcting these errors would improve the grammatical accuracy. The range of structures is relatively simple; incorporating more complex sentence structures would enhance the grammatical range.