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Band 6+: Are there any other jobs that you think should have high salaries? Why do you think that?

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I think that there are many types of jobs that deserve high salaries. For example, army personnel have a very high salary because they secure our whole country from many bad people. Policemen and doctors also deserve high salaries because they protect society. Doctors secure society from the spread of many diseases and also save lives. Policemen improve people's quality of life and ensure that daily routines are not interrupted. Their roles are crucial in maintaining safety and health in our communities.

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I think that there are many types of jobs which are deserve high salary like army men has a very high salary because they secure our whole country or whole nation from the many, many, many bad people and also policemen and doctors jobs are recommended to high salary because they secure whole society from doctors secure whole society from many spread, many disease and also secure their lives in and policemen control, control, control policemen also improves people quality of life and always getting notice about that all people don’t interrupt daily men routine life

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that: 3

many: 3

high: 3

deserve: 2

salaries: 2

because: 2

secure: 2

policemen: 2

doctors: 2

society: 2

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The response is well-organized and coherent, providing relevant examples to support the main points. Consider expanding on the reasoning behind why these professions deserve high salaries, perhaps by exploring the level of skill, training, responsibility, or societal impact involved. Adding a broader perspective beyond the examples provided would further enhance the response.

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The answer is understandable, but there's noticeable repetition and some hesitant phrasing. Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions between ideas and reducing the repetition of words like "many" and "control." Practice speaking at a more natural pace and focus on connecting your ideas more seamlessly.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Words like "secure" are used repeatedly and less sophisticated synonyms could be used. Expanding vocabulary with more specific and nuanced terms related to the roles of army personnel, police, and doctors would improve the score. For example, instead of 'secure society,' consider using terms like 'safeguard public health' or 'maintain social order'.

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