Part 3

Band 5+: Art should be supported.

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Thank you for allowing me this opportunity to talk about an interesting topic. Arts should be supported by the government. Most teenagers and young adults are interested in this subject, especially in school or other educational settings. These types of subjects are very important for the government and others because the arts should be preserved. There are problems, such as drawbacks that outweigh disadvantages. Advantages like the importance of arts in my country are often overlooked. So I recommend the government spend on healthcare and education because...

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Thank you for allowing me this opportunity to talk about interesting topic. Arts should be supported by the government. Most of the teenagers and young teens are interested in this subject, especially in the school or other education. Because these types of subjects are very important for the government, then others, because arts should be preserved. There are problems, such as… We have drawbacks that are outweigh disadvantages. Advantages like arts are not important in my country. So I recommend the government to spend health care, education, because…

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

arts: 3

government: 3

should: 2

because: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks a clear and well-developed discussion of why art should be supported. The response mentions the importance of art and the need for government support, but it does not fully explore the reasons behind this support. Consider expanding on the benefits of supporting art, such as its cultural significance, economic impact, or contribution to individual development. A more structured approach, with clear arguments and examples, would improve the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the ideas are not fully developed and there are some instances of repetition and self-correction. The structure could be improved by creating a clearer argument with a more logical flow. Focus on a more concise and organized presentation of your ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. The phrasing is sometimes awkward. Try to use more sophisticated vocabulary and more precise language to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'drawbacks that outweigh disadvantages,' use a more concise and impactful phrase like 'the benefits outweigh the costs'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies, particularly in sentence structure and word choice. Work on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to enhance the complexity and accuracy of your speech.

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