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Band 5+: Can exercise help people improve concentration?

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In my opinion, exercise cannot improve our concentration because concentration depends on our psychological condition. But exercise weakens our skills because it gets hard. For example, two months ago I worked in a restaurant, and my concentration was very poor because I got angry at everything; the exercise made me mad.

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In my opinion, making exercise cannot improve our concentration because concentration depends on our psychology condition. But exercise makes weak our skills because it gets hard. For example, two months ago I worked in a restaurant and my concentration was very awful because I get angry at everything because the exercise makes me mad.

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concentration: 3

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Task Response

The response is somewhat off-topic, focusing on personal experience and a subjective opinion rather than providing a general overview of the relationship between exercise and concentration. Consider exploring the various ways exercise might improve concentration, such as increased blood flow to the brain or stress reduction, and support your points with general evidence rather than personal anecdotes.

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The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The connection between exercise and anger isn't clearly explained, and the example is somewhat confusing. Try to present your ideas in a more logical sequence with clearer transitions between points. Work on speaking more smoothly; there are some hesitations and unnatural phrasing.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "awful" and "mad" are simple and could be replaced with more precise and nuanced language. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. Consider using synonyms for frequently used words.

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There are some grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb tenses ("makes weak," "get angry") and article usage. While the message is mostly clear, improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the overall quality of your response. Focus on practicing different sentence structures and paying attention to subject-verb agreement.

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