Band 6+: Can money buy happiness?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant reasons to support the viewpoint. To improve, consider expanding on the examples and providing more specific details to strengthen the argument. Also, avoid using conversational phrases like "See you in brighter days" in a formal speaking context.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and a slight lack of flow. The ideas are connected, but the transitions could be smoother. Try to minimize pauses and use linking words to improve coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or precise. The phrase "See you in brighter" is not a common expression and sounds unnatural. Focus on expanding your vocabulary and using more natural-sounding phrases. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are grammatical errors, such as "money but by happiness" and awkward phrasing like "doing to get a good education." The range of structures is limited. Work on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider variety of sentence structures.