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Band 6+: Could you recommend some effective strategies for governments and employers to ensure people have a good work-life balance?

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Governments and employers can adopt a work-life balance through many useful strategies. For instance, they should schedule suitable timings for employees. This can boost their confidence and allow them enough time to relax during their free time. Furthermore, many employers should award the best employees every month or every year. This can enhance their confidence and support their personal development.

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Governments and employers can adopt a work-life balance with many useful ways. For instance, firstly, they should schedule many suitable timings for employers. it can boost their confidence and they can also have enough time to relax in the year free time. For the more, many employers should award to the best employees every month or every year it can boost their confidence and self-confidence or development.

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employers: 2

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employees: 2

confidence: 2

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