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Band 4+: Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

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I'd like to talk about my brother. He's a very passionate and determined person. He recently started a clothing business in the city. It's become quite popular in the area because of his excellent customer service and attention to detail. He's always been interested in fashion and design, so starting his own business was a natural progression for him. While I admire his entrepreneurial spirit, I don't think I'd be interested in running a clothing business myself. I prefer working with people and helping them solve problems.

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I would like to talk about my brother. He is passionate and determined in his work. He recently started a ah, business of ah, clothes in the city. Um, the business is now being very much popular among the MHM among the area because of his m service and he provide mhm mhm m and spend and utilize my money on my one field.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 3

clothing: 2

interested: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The student provides a basic description of their brother's business, but lacks detail. They mention the business is popular but don't elaborate on why. The student could have provided more specific details about the type of clothing, the target audience, or the challenges their brother faced. The student also doesn't fully explain why they wouldn't want to do the same kind of work. They could have elaborated on their own interests and career aspirations. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

3.5

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and disjointed, with several filler words and repetitions. The student struggles to organize their thoughts and provide a clear and coherent response. They could benefit from practicing speaking more fluently and naturally.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a limited range of vocabulary, relying on basic words and phrases. They could have used more specific and descriptive language to enhance their response. For example, instead of saying 'popular,' they could have said 'thriving' or 'successful.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The student makes several grammatical errors, including incorrect articles and verb tenses. They also struggle with sentence structure and fluency. The student could benefit from practicing their grammar and sentence construction.

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Band 4+: Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

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Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

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