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Part 2

Band 4+: describe a book or movie thart had a strong impact on you

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Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. The Prophet, sallallahu alaihi wa sallam, Allah Ta'ala sent the Quran for their peoples, and our Prophet, sallallahu alaihi wa sallam, peace be upon him, is described in many ways. First of all, when any human reads initially, they may feel confused. Why? Because it speaks of the other world. When we die, we go to another world. If you have good deeds, you will be able to go to Jannah; if you did bad deeds in the previous world, you go to hell, which has a lot of punishment for those who do wrong and go the wrong way. Allah Ta'ala guides humans to choose which path is clearly right and to avoid the paths that are totally wrong, which will lead to issues in the future. When we read the Quran, I understand what is good for me and what is bad for me. I completely understand what Allah says about following the path to Jannah. You must follow the right path, and you should pray five times a day. During Ramadan, you fast for the entire month. This is a duty for all humans from Allah, and I have to admit that it has had a profound impact on my life.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. Allah is the Greatest. the Prophet sallallahu alaihi wa sallam, Allah Ta’ala sent the Quran for their peoples and our Prophet sallallahu alaihi wa sallam, peace be upon him, is described anything. So first of all, when the people, any human, read first initially, so he confused. So why, what do you think? Because he is saying the other world, when we die, when we die, we go to another world. If you have good works, you will be able to go to Jannah, if you did bad work in the past, previous world, you go to hell and lot of punishment for the people in the world. doing wrong thing and go the wrong ways. So Allah ta’ala, our humans, to the, I say the humans, to go which is, which path is clearly is right and avoid this path which are totally wrong and you are facing issues in future. So you when we when we decide the Quran, I understand what’s good for me and what’s the bad thing for me and I completely understand what Allah says to follow the follow the Jannah, follow which parts or which rites are going to the Jannah, you can you must have to follow this right side and you pray five times in a day and in Ramadan you fast completely month there’s a duty our all humans from the God from the Allah and I have to admit

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Overall Band Score

4
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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Vocabulary Repetition:
allah: 17
greatest: 13
world: 3
which: 3
wrong: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

6
Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

4
The response addresses the topic by identifying the Quran as a book that has had a profound impact. However, the answer fails to meet several key requirements of the prompt. Specifically, there is no mention of 'when' the book was read, and the description of the 'story' is replaced by a general explanation of religious doctrines and duties. To improve, ensure that every bullet point in the prompt is addressed directly. For a book, instead of focusing solely on religious teachings, try to describe the narrative structure or the specific context in which you encountered the text. Additionally, avoid repetitive phrases at the beginning of the response, as this does not contribute to the development of the topic and affects the coherence of the speech.

Fluency & Coherence

4
The response lacks a coherent structure required for an IELTS Part 2 long turn. While you address the topic of the Quran, the delivery is repetitive and lacks the logical progression of a story or an explanation. You spent a significant amount of time on repetitive phrases at the beginning, which does not contribute to the task. To improve, use signposting language (e.g., 'Moving on to the content...', 'The reason it impacted me was...') to guide the listener through your points.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive (e.g., 'good works', 'bad work', 'wrong thing', 'wrong ways'). While the religious terminology is appropriate for the subject matter, you need more academic and descriptive English to reach higher bands. Instead of 'bad work', use 'sinful actions' or 'misdeeds'. Instead of 'wrong ways', use 'deviant paths' or 'erroneous ways'. Work on using collocations to express complex ideas more naturally. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
There are significant grammatical errors that impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Allah Ta'ala sent the Quran for their peoples'), tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'So first of all, when the people, any human, read first initially, so he confused'). You frequently use 'so' as a filler. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly how to use relative clauses and conditional sentences (e.g., 'If one follows the teachings, they will find peace').

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