Part 2

Band 5+: Describe a career you want to choose after finishing school. You should say: what is it and explain why it would suit you.

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After school, I would like to start my own business because I don't really want to work with children or with strangers I don't know. I want to work for myself and create my own things and business strategies. This is also good for me because I can earn a good income from this business, and maybe I will also make history with my business strategy.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

After school maybe I would like to start my own business because I don’t really want to work with children or with strangers that I don’t know. And maybe I don’t want to work with someone. I want to work on myself and make my own things and business strategies. That’s also good for me because I can get really good money from this business and maybe I will also be in history, maybe, by my business strategy.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 4

with: 3

because: 2

don't: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic by describing a desired career path. However, it could benefit from more specific details about the type of business and a more thorough explanation of why it suits you personally. Providing concrete examples or elaborating on your skills and interests would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations ('maybe'). The ideas are presented, but the structure could be improved for better flow. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking to avoid repetition and hesitation. Using transition words can also help connect your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. While the words used are appropriate, the range is limited. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to business and career aspirations. For example, instead of 'make my own things,' you could say 'develop innovative products' or 'create unique services.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are some simple sentence structures and a few awkward phrasings ('work with someone,' 'be in history'). To enhance your grammatical range, try incorporating more complex sentence structures and varied verb tenses. For example, instead of 'I want to work on myself,' consider 'I aspire to be self-employed and independent.'

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