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Band 6+: Describe a change you would like to make in your life.

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So a significant change I desire to make in my life is time management. My life was kind of messy because I cannot manage between studying, work, and even giving myself spare time to take care of myself. Sometimes deadlines just come up, and I cannot find myself controlling them. I'm struggling with how to put the timeline together correctly. I'm still trying my best to do it, and I even studied it on YouTube from famous influencers or YouTubers because they share tips on how you can improve yourself and manage to create a perfect timeline. It depends on your own events. So I continue to work on it, and I think in the future, I can manage to do it right and no longer have to stress about these problems anymore.

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So a significant chance I desire to make in my life is time management. My life was kind of messy because I cannot manage between studying, work, and even giving the spare time to take care of myself. Sometimes deadlines just coming up and I cannot find myself control it. I’m struggle with like how we can put the timeline correctly. I’m still trying my best to do it and I even studied it on YouTube from famous influencers or YouTubers because they share some tips like how you can improve yourself, how you can manage to make a perfect timeline. It depends on your own event. So I still continue to do it and I think in the future I can manage to do it right and no longer have to stretch out about these problems anymore.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

manage: 3

myself: 3

because: 2

cannot: 2

timeline: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response adequately addresses the topic, mentioning a desire for improved time management and connecting it to personal struggles. However, more specific examples of past time management issues and concrete steps planned for improvement would strengthen the response. Elaborating on the YouTube resources used and their impact would also enhance the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few minor hesitations and repetitions ("I'm struggle with", "how you can improve yourself, how you can manage"), but the overall flow is good. Consider pausing slightly more strategically between ideas to enhance clarity and pacing.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "messy" and "stretch out" are slightly informal, but acceptable in this context. More precise vocabulary could be used in places; for example, instead of "messy," consider "disorganized" or "chaotic." The phrase "put the timeline together correctly" could be improved to something like "construct an effective schedule" or "develop a realistic timeline."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors. For example, "I cannot find myself control it" should be "I cannot control it" or "I find it difficult to control." The sentence "It depends on your own event" should be "It depends on your own events." While the errors don't significantly impede understanding, improving grammatical accuracy will raise the score. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and more complex sentence constructions.

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