Band 4+: Describe a conversation you had that changed your perspective. You should say: - Who you spoke with - Where and when the conversation took place - What you discussed And explain how your perspective shifted as a result.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the topic by describing a conversation with teachers about grades and university applications, and it mentions a change in perspective. However, it lacks specific details about the content of the conversation and the exact nature of the change. The response is relatively brief and could be developed further with more personal experience and concrete examples. Additionally, the final sentence about 'the way to Mars' is confusing and off-topic, which detracts from the clarity of the response. To improve, provide more specific information about what was discussed, how the conversation unfolded, and precisely how your perspective changed, with a clear and logical conclusion. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer lacks a clear structure and logical progression. The speaker jumps from describing the conversation to an abrupt and nonsensical ending ('on the way to Mars'), which confuses the listener. There is noticeable repetition and self-correction ('my own perspective, my own mind, and perspective', 'vision. vision'). To improve, organize your answer with clear sections: who, when/where, what, and how it changed you. Use cohesive devices like 'firstly', 'then', 'as a result' to link ideas smoothly. Avoid irrelevant or confusing details.

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. The word 'perspective' is overused, and there is a misuse of 'conservation' instead of 'conversation'. The phrase 'on the way to Mars' is inappropriate and likely a mistake. To improve, expand your vocabulary with synonyms (e.g., 'viewpoint', 'outlook', 'insight') and use precise words. Practice using idiomatic expressions and collocations naturally, such as 'a turning point' or 'broaden my horizons'.

There are several grammatical errors and awkward structures. For example, 'who really give and provide me impact' should be 'who really gave and provided me with an impact'. The tense is inconsistent ('It was in school, 9th grade in the past' is redundant). The sentence 'We talked about it on the way to Mars' is grammatically correct but semantically nonsensical. To improve, practice using past tenses consistently and ensure subject-verb agreement. Work on constructing more complex sentences with subordinate clauses to demonstrate a wider range of grammar.