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Band 5+: Describe a creative person whose work you admire. You should say: - Who this person is - What type of work they do - How you became aware of their work And explain why you admire their work.

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I would like to talk about a person I admire, who is my brother. He is a barista and has a great coffee shop where he makes different types of coffee, such as lattes and vanilla lattes. He has a talent for making coffee, and every day he works hard to create delicious coffee. He has two different types of coffee shops, and many people come from different countries to taste his coffee. I admire his work because he works efficiently and has achieved a lot in this field. I know he is a great barista in the world. He is also very friendly and always talks with customers in a warm manner.

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I would like to talk about an admired person and who is my brother. He is a barista, he has a good coffee shop and he makes different types of coffee such as latte, vanilla latte, He has a good talent about making coffee and every day he is working hard and he makes different types of delicios coffee and I lab coffee and I lab coffee and the hard coffee shop is he has a two different types of coffee shop and there are many people come here for from different countries and test hard coffee and I admire about her work because he works with efficiently he has a lot of achievement about this work and I know I know he is a great good barista in the world and he is so friendly and he always talk with friendly people and

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

coffee: 6

different: 3

admire: 2

barista: 2

great: 2

types: 2

lattes: 2

works: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but could benefit from more depth and specific details. To improve, elaborate on how you became familiar with your brother's work and provide more concrete examples of his creativity and achievements. Focus on fully developing each aspect of the prompt for a more comprehensive answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent but contains noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('I lab coffee and I lab coffee'). The structure is present, but the flow could be improved by using more varied linking words and phrases. Try to avoid repeating the same phrases and focus on expanding each point more fully.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks precision and variety. There are some basic terms related to coffee and coffee shops, but the language is quite simple. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to the creative aspects of being a barista and the coffee-making process. For example, instead of just saying 'different types of coffee,' describe the unique flavors or brewing methods.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are several errors that affect clarity ('test hard coffee,' 'I lab coffee,' 'hard coffee shop'). There's a limited range of sentence structures. Focus on using a wider variety of sentence structures and tenses accurately. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct word order.

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Band 5+: Describe a creative person whose work you admire. You should say: - Who this person is - What type of work they do - How you became aware of their work And explain why you admire their work.

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Describe a creative person whose work you admire. You should say: – Who this person is – What type of work they do – How you became aware of their work And explain why you admire their work.

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