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Band 6+: Describe a family business you know. You should say: - what the business is - how you know this family business - what different roles within the business the family members have - and explain how this business could be developed in the future.

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Two years ago, one of my best friend's family developed their own farmland to provide organic products such as dairy, fruits, vegetables, and other things. I can remember that they didn't use any chemical fertilizer, and all the processes of producing fruits, vegetables, and dairy were natural. There were many activities from caring for the livestock to packing different products to sell to people. I think that these days having a healthy diet is very important for the majority of people, and therefore they want to buy organic products. The main reason maybe is the explosion of cancers and different disorders in recent years.

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Two years ago one of my best friends family developed their own farmland to provide organic products such as diaries, fruits, vegetables and other things. I can remember that they didn’t use any chemical fertilizer and all the process of producing fruits, vegetables and diaries was natural. There were many activities from carrying the livestock to packing different products to sell the people. I think that these days having a healthy diet is very important for the majority of people and therefore they want to buy organic products and the main reason maybe is explosion of cancers and different disorders in the recent years.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

products: 3

years: 2

organic: 2

dairy: 2

fruits: 2

vegetables: 2

different: 2

people: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer addresses the topic by describing a family business, but it could be more fully developed. It mentions the type of business (organic farming), who owns it (a friend's family), and some activities involved. However, it lacks specific details about the ownership structure and could elaborate more on the activities. The explanation of your idea of the business is somewhat general and could be strengthened with personal insights or specific examples. To improve, consider providing more concrete details about the business operations and your personal connection or observations. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and follows a logical structure, but it lacks a clear introduction and conclusion. The response could benefit from more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. There is some repetition and the flow is slightly choppy. To improve, use phrases like 'firstly', 'in addition', 'moreover', and 'in conclusion' to organize thoughts better.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise or varied. Words like 'diaries' (should be 'dairy'), 'carrying' (should be 'caring for'), and 'explosion' are used, but there is room for more sophisticated terms. Try using synonyms like 'cultivate', 'livestock management', 'packaging', and 'prevalence' to enhance lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate but contains some errors, such as 'my best friends family' (should be 'my best friend's family'), 'to sell the people' (should be 'to sell to people'), and 'maybe is' (should be 'may be'). The sentence structures are simple and could be more varied. Practice using complex sentences with relative clauses and conditionals to improve grammatical range.

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Band 6+: Describe a family business you know. You should say: - what the business is - how you know this family business - what different roles within the business the family members have - and explain how this business could be developed in the future.

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